Оценку не ставлю, но начало туповатое. ГГ пробило на чаёк и думать ГГ пока не в может. Потом запой. Идет тупой набор звуков и действий. То что у нормального человека на анализ обстановки тратится секунды или на минуты, тут полный ноль. ГГ только понял, что он обрезанный еврей. Дальше идет пустой трёп. ГГ всего боится и это основная тема. ГГ признал в себе опального и застреленного писателя, позже оправданного. В основном идёт
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apart, so that a very slight person could squeeze in, sideways. 'You must be strong, she said. 'Now, there isn't any need to go out that way. Just walk out of that door, she pointed at the door to the living-room, 'and go through into the veranda, and run into the bush. Go to another district and get yourself an honest job and stop being a thief. I'll talk to the baas. I'll tell him to tell the police we made a mistake.Now then, Tembi… she concluded urgently, and went into the passage, where Willie was at the' telephone, with his back to her.
He lifted his head, looked at her incredulously, and said: 'Jane, you're crazy. Into the telephone he said: 'Yes, come quickly. He set down the receiver, turned to Jane and said: 'You know he'll do it again, don't you? He ran back to the bedroom.
But there had been no need to run. There stood Tembi, exactly where they had left him, his fists in his eyes, like a small child.
'I told you to run away, said Jane angrily.
'He's nuts, said Willie.
And now, just as Jane had done, Willie picked up the rifle, seemed to feel foolish holding it, and set it down again.
Willie sat on the bed and looked at Tembi with the look of one who has been outwitted. 'Well, I'm damned, he said, it's got me beat, this has.
Tembi continued to stand there in the centre of the floor, hanging his head and crying. Jane was crying too. Willie was getting angrier, more and more irritable. Finally he left the room, slamming the door, and saying: 'God damn it, everyone is mad.
Soon the police came, and there was no doubt about what should be done. Tembi nodded at every question: he admitted everything. The handcuffs were put on him, and he was taken away in the police car.
At last Willie came back into the bedroom, where Jane lay crying on the bed. He patted her on the shoulder and said: 'Now stop it. The thing is over. We can't do anything.
Jane sobbed out: 'He's only alive because of me. That's what's so awful. And now he's going to prison.
'They don't think anything of prison. It isn't a disgrace as it is for us.
'But he's going to be one of those natives who spend all their lives in and out of prison..
'Well, what of it? said Willie. With the gentle, controlled exasperation of a husband, he lifted Jane and offered her his handkerchief. 'Now stop it, old girl, he reasoned. 'Do stop it. I'm tired. I want to go to bed. I've had hell up and down those damned pavements all day, and I've got a heavy day tomorrow with the tobacco. He began pulling off his boots.
Jane stopped crying, and also undressed. 'There's something horrible about it all, she said restlessly. 'I can't forget it. And finally, 'What did hewant, Willie? What is it he was wanting, all this time?
Примечания
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Вид червей, паразитирующих в кишках человека.
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Printed in Doris Lessing. This Was the Old Chief's Country: Collected African Stories Volume One / Flamingo: An Imprint of HarperCollinsPublishers
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